My oral presentation

My video:

  
                                                   

Ovservation of my presentation : 

I use a powerpoint with some pictures.
I spend 1 minute and 7 secons.
I look the audience but I don't move it.
I don't read.
I organize my ideas in order
The information is correct and varied but I not used examples
The grammar is correct and varied
The vocabulary isn't more rich but I don't repeat the words.
I pronunce all the words
I don't use the diccionary 


Transcription :

Hy I'm Enric and This is my oral presentation.
I get up at seven o'clock, I breakfast, I have a shower and I dress.
From nine o 'clock to half past one I'm in classes.
After I go home for lunch with my family and at three o'clock from five o'clock I'm again in classes.
At five o'clock I go home, I do my homework and I dinner with my family.
Finaly at eleven o'clock I go to bed. 
On tuesdays after classes I go to english classes and on wednesday and saturday I go to play tennis with my friends.
At the weekend I relax and I prepare for the next week.


Some classmates presentations :


Marta O : She lunch in her house
Jordi: She goes to play tennis
Bernat Diaz: He lunch in her house
Pol: He plays basketball
Mireia F : She goes to school by bike.
Gerard : He goes to play football.